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#1 2017-12-02 20:37:48, last edited by danielcool1 (2017-12-02 20:45:48)

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Silent Night

This world needs feedback and what I need to improve, to make it better.
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Time beaten: 5 Minutes and 44 Seconds


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#2 2017-12-03 04:54:31

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Re: Silent Night

"The Requested world is set to Friends Only"

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#3 2017-12-03 05:01:46, last edited by danielcool1 (2017-12-03 05:01:55)

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Re: Silent Night

Fixed, try playing it again


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#4 2017-12-03 06:20:28, last edited by Doodle (2017-12-18 12:34:45)

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Re: Silent Night

cut & edited...

I enjoyed the game-play running back and forth, i liked it like that because its been a while since i played a world where its not a cramped room from beginning to end.

The story line was fine until you said a nuke was gonna blow the hometown... what ._. that's so random. How about you give more details in the story-line and develop it better.

Since almost everything is easy, i suggest you decrease the two-three spike paths to two spike paths so the difficulty has a consistent flow near the end.

And since this world appears to be aimed at being easy, i saw a player rage quit at the beginning not able to jump on the Christmas tree so make that a bit easier too.

As suggested in the story, you did not make the world "like a Hometown". There's only one house which is the spawn. There's no "living" town's people. idk why there's skulls.

Snow art style is dull on mini map although its not bad to use a snow block for all the snow.

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